The Abyss of Elysium - mfsa7991 (2024)

Chapter 1: Calm before the Night

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The dark hour has gone, the world was saved from destruction. The SEES members had now normal lives, Mitsuru attended college and is now the CEO of the Kirijo group, Akihiko had entered the police academy and is an honor student and Shinji was now a chef in a fast food restaurant, it felt weird not exploring Tartarus or dealing with shadows but it was good to know that it will be no more Apathy syndrome cases, however, Makoto recently Makoto has started to have nightmares about the bridge incident and how death killed his family.

he was a kid, he was trying to help his Twin sister Kotone, Makoto was Luck he was able to get out of the crash uninjured and, Kotone was not that lucky she was very injured and unconscious, despite his age he was able to get her out the car, he saw the dead bodies of his parents, he was going to save his twin he cried for help desperate until Aigis found him, She sealed Death inside him, after that he He fainted.

He woke up in a hospital, a sister explained to him what happened he was found unconscious on a bridge after an accident, his twin was alive but she was in a coma, he demanded to see his twin, the sister understood and when with him, when they arrived to the room he was shocked he want her to wake up.

"Hi Kotone, I'm here for you, i will not leave until you wake up," he said with tears in his eyes.

he had been standing by her side all day but nothing happened. he was moved to an orphanage after school, and he visited her for days, when the visit ended he returned with his sister to the orphanage, now his home. He returned to the hospital every day hoping that his sister would wake up until one day she did it. Makoto begged the sister to go to the hospital immediately. When he came she saw her sister covered with bandages and intravenous

"Twin bro," she said cheerfully

"Kotone!" he cried and yelled

"I'm Sorry for this trouble" she responded crying

"It´s okay we are together" Makoto replied

"But how Mom and Dad died we no family left, we have nowhere to go " She responded very sadly.

"We have each other, and our parents will always be with us in spirit, then being able to get out we will live in the same orphanage with me," Makoto said

"Thank you, bro, we always be together." She said happy

" Of course, I bring some table games wanna play? Makoto asked.

" Of course, bro" She happily replied.

They spent the next days playing games, despite her condition Makoto was happy that her sister finally woke up, she was getting better, Makoto hoped the day that Kotone would be, but one night something happened to her, out of nowhere she enters in a critical state, the doctors tried to stabilised and translated to a better hospital, but they couldn´t do it, she died during the transfer.

That night a sister told Makoto, she passed away. the news shocked him so much that he was even unable to cry, the hit was so high that couldn´t say anything the sister had to make him react, he days later he was in a cemetery with a bouquet saying goodbye to the only family member he what was left.

Since that day Makoto started to be apathetic, nothing and no one cared for him, he was eventually adopted and moved away from Port Island with time passed he won a scholarship to Gekkogan High School.

11 Years after.

When he ended the dark hour he felt that he avenged his family, then why is that remember is going back to him right.

After Mitsuru graduated Makoto became the new Student the new council president, the teachers as well many students were asking for the "disappearance" of Ryoji so we made up that he had a terminal disease. I proposed to plant a tree in the school garden to honor him, everyone in the council agrees, many students have to go to play their respect to him.

However Makoto still felt guilty for not being able to save Ryoji, however, he couldn´t stick in the past this was not what Ryoji wanted, he wanted all of us to live the best we could, and he was able to start to move on thanks to the help of his friends and his beloved Girlfriend Yukari.

That night when he got to dream he appeared in the Velvet Room, but it was a little different the elevator that was the room was going down instead of upstairs.

"Welcome to the Velvet Room," Igor said.

"Why am I here I thought that my journey had ended and why the room has changed ?" Makoto asked

"You see the change, good, soon a new thread will come, you will need all your friends to defeat him, as well for the change here is because you need to find a truth that is in your past that was stolen for you" Elizabeth responded

"What truth, what treat, what are you talking about ?" Makoto asked.

" That is beyond our knowledge, but don´t worry you will be able to find it and succeed in this mission, farewell," Igor said before Makoto woke up he was shocked what was this new thread, what was that stolen truth?

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In Greek Mythology Elysium is the opposite of Tartarus.

Tartarus is the Greek equivalent of Hell.

Elysium is the Greek equivalent of Heaven

Chapter 2: The return of the Dark hour

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Meanwhile in a big house on Port Island Hamuko Shiomi went to sleep very happy and relieved that Dark hour, tartarous and the shadows she fought so hard with his partner the antishadow suppression weapon, Metis

She had avenged her family, she fell asleep but then

She appeared in an elevator that was going down.

"Welcome to the Velvet Room," Igor said.

"Why am I here I thought Dark Hour is gone has ended? and why the room has changed." Hamuko asked.

"I'm sorry but your journey has not ended yet, you still have defeated a great tread, that´s the reason for the change in the room you gotta go back to the beginning to end this thread and take back your destiny .“ Theodore responded.

“What is it”? Hamuko asked.

" That is beyond our knowledge, but don´t worry you will be able to find it and succeed in your journey, you have the power of your bonds with you, farewell," Igor said before Hamuko woke up and asked herself what this thread is and who and why killed his parents and brother.

Days after Makoto couldn´t stop thinking about that warning, so he stayed awake until midnight to make sure that nothing happened days passed until it was spring break.

Yukari, Mitsuru, and Fuuka were to slumber party in Yuko’s house with, Hamuko, Chihiro, and Rio.

They talk about clothes, see movies, listen to music, play some games, dance, prove a makeover.

One thing led to another until Chidori brought up an interesting topic to talk about boys.

“Oh fine, I go first” Hamuko Said.

“Akihiko is so cool, he is strong, I believe he never thought that someone would be able to keep with his training and eat regiments” Hamuko continued.

“He can be very extreme sometimes” Mitsuru replies.

“But you see his muscles, are worth it, but sometimes can be so dense once he thought I was dating Jumpei and I told him Don´t even joke about it “ Hamuko responded as everyone laughed.

“Who´s next,” Rio asked.

“I´ll go”

“Shinji is very strong and is a great cook he may look like a rebel but he is very kind to everyone, especially me” Fuuka responded

“Me next” Yukari stated.

“When I first saw Makoto I thought he was just emo, but after know him very well, I realized how cool and smart he is, how he helped me to fix my relationship with my mom, I knew was the man of my life, when we decided after graduate we will be married ”. As everyone gasped.

“Congratulations Yukari-san” f*ckka said.

“My best wishes,” Chihiro said.

“You two are really into it, great” Rio responded.

"You made a great couple" Yuko respoded

“AHHHHH, YAY!!!” Hamuko yells.

“Magnifique, although I wish to have a boyfriend, it´s not hard to find someone that doesn´t love me for my money with my social status and my friends already took all the reliable guys” Mitsuru responded with bit a of jealousy.

“Wait Mitsuru senpai what about that you dated in the Second year, what was his name? Tatsuya, Tsubasa? Hamuko asked.

Mitsuru blushed, “Takuto Maruki and we were just friends, a good guy however she moves family moved to Tokyo by the end of that year, and he sent his condolences for the passed of my father”:

Chihiro asked quietly, shy and with a soft voice “Uhm, so, do you have any advice on boys”?

There was a pause before everyone gasped. Until Yukari asked.

“Who is the lucky one?”

Chihiro was shy very shy to tell them.

“It´s okay we are all friends here, we will tell no one” Hamuko assured her.

“It´s Hidetoshi, but I don´t know how to tell him, what am I supposed to do?.” Chidori asked.

“Just be calm and tell him, you are a great girl, nice, generous, and reliable, I am sure he will be honored to be your boyfriend.” Mitsuru assured her.

“Yeah, go for a girl” Yukari encouraged her.

But then midnight came, and with that Chidori, Rio, and Yuko became coffins.

The rest were shocked the dark Hour had returned and Hamuko wasn´t a Coffin which means she has the potential, Hamuko was equally shocked.

She didn´t know that her friend had the potential and from how they looked it seemed that they were in the dark hour before that would mean they also had personas, Then Hamuko asked.

“So, all you are persona user? Mitsutu asked

“Yes, but we will talk about that later, we need to get dressed and search for the origin of this, the best place to start will be Gekkoukan” Then she sighed “It seems that Makoto's warning was true.”

Hamuko Interrupted, “Makoto has a persona, too?”

“Yes, now get dressed, we explained everything on the way.”

The girls were dressed and went to Gekkoukan, when they went out they realized that something was different during the dark hour the sky was green, scoffing that there were people, there was no doubt this was the dark hour. Meanwhile, in the travel, they told Hamuko all about SEES and its members, and she felt shocked to know that his Boyfriend Akihiko was also a persona user.

but he understood why he didn´t tell him how everyone can believe all this and even if he did, he didn´t know I have a persona too. But what impressed me most was that Makoto also used multiple personas when she responded.

“Makoto can use multiple personas, so do I.”

They were impressed that this girl had the same power as his leader.

Then Hamuko asked “How do you know this will happen “.

Fuuka replied “We didn´t Makoto told us that something bad would come, he didn´t know why or who but told us to be prepared”?

Hamuko was even more confused that would mean that Theo was the one who told the warning.

When were closer they realized something “There is no Tartarus,” Yukari said.

“What are we going? Fuuka asked.

“To Gekkoukan, even if there is no Tartarus, it will be the first place that the boys will, look? Mitsuru responded.

The boys and Aigis were at the entrance of the school, they were glad that they were okay but they were surprised by hakumo.

“Girls are you Hamuko what are you doing here?” Akihiko asked.

“Yes, thank you and I like all you a persona user.” Hamuko replied.

The boys gasped.

Akihiko felt guilty for not telling the truth to his girlfriend, but she realized.

“Don´t worry Akihiko-senpai, I understand there is no way that you should know I have a persona, you were trying to protect me and others from the dark hour, so thank you.” Hamuko assured to his Boyfriend.

Hamuko then realized Aigis “Oh another Robot I thought Metis was the only wan left”.

“What are you talking about, there is another like me,” Aigis asked surprised.

Mitsuru asked, “Anyways I wanna know since when you have been involved with the dark hour?”.

Everyone looks at her, Hamuko responds “Well since a few years.”

Everyone gasped who was this girl “What “Jumpei said.

“But how none of noticed you?” Shinji asked .

“Please elaborate more “Aigis her.

“Very well I knew about the dark hour since my grandpa told me about 11 years ago” Hamuko responded.

“Who is he and how does he know about the dark hour?” Yukari questions her

“His name is Sakuya Shiomi, He was researching shadows for the Kirijo group until there was an accident, that resulted in the release of a dangerous shadow, that killed my parents and brother he was only able to save me, raise me and train me to fight shadows” Hamuko responded.

“My father was the researcher leader in that investigation the will tried to revied the appraiser of Nyx to destroy the world however my father betrayed them as a result the experiment failed and was created, and to stop death Aigis sealed Death inside my Boyfriend.” Yukari replied with sorrow in his voice.

Now Hamuko understood why the Dark Hour was created but she couldn’t understand why his grandpa joined that horrible research and why he helped to destroy it, maybe he regrets his past actions.

“So more people were killed that night,” Makoto said as Hamuko noticed then elaborated “My parents and sister were that night bridge, they died in a crash accident, but I and my twin sister survived, but she died in the hospital ”.

“I see, I sorry” Hamuko responded.

“How about the other Aigis” Ken asked.

“Grandpa told me that he built it to help end the dark hour, we explored Tartarus as well as other parts of the city together.” Hamuko responded.

" I don´t know how to say this but all scientists of that project died that night and even if your grandfather has survived, None of the researchers had that name, last name, or description like that," Mitsuru said

Hamuko was shocked that would mean that her whole life was a lie she couldn´t believe it the man that he believed was her grandparent was a lie, the people he lost were not real the who I am she thought.

“I'm sorry, but maybe we can find clues in your house.” Mitsuru said.

Hamuko understood her and responded “Of course, follow me.” Hamuko said as they went to her house when came Hamuko house no one was there to look for clues of what happened.

They went to her house it was a great one with a garden, and many luxuries, for someone of the higher class not a the level of Mitsuru but still a very expensive one, they explored, and Hamukot told them of the lab where Metis lives and "Grampa" makes her research about shadows, Hamuko took her naginata as well as they found a room that Hamuko didn´t know when they enter they saw a secret lab but much weirder there was a weird stair in the bottom of the room they decided to keep going the stairs, when they came down they were shocked for what they saw it was a sand dessert that extended as long as they can see. there was nothing there just a door.

Hamuko was shocked why was this thing inside her house, where were "Grandpa" and Metis.

“We need to enter the door, to get to the bottom of this, everyone ready? “Makoto asked.

“Yes, my love” Yukari responded.

“Hell yeah”, “Let´s do this”, “Ready whenever you are”, “Let´s go”, “I will do my best” the rest responded.

"Let´s go," said Makoto as well as the passed the door.

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Chapter 3: Etrer to the Abyss

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They were ready to enter however they were stopped by two voices that came from behind.

"Welcome" they Announced.

They were none other than Elizabeth and Theodore.

The others didn´t understand who are these people dressed like bellhops.

"Wow, she is gorgeous" Jumpei Exclaimed.

"Now is not the time for that!, do you know her " a jealous Yukari yelled and asked her Boyfriend.

Makoto responded "She is my assistant"

Yukari was confused "Your what?"

"I am the assistant on this man´s journey my name is Elizabeth. It's a pleasure to meet you, I mean no harm to you." Elizabeth chimed.

"And I am Theodore the assistant on this lady´s journey it´s an honor" Teodore Stated.

"Can we trust in them?" Mitsuru asked.

"Of course" Makoto replied.

"I see, very well" Mitsuru responded.

"We came to support you" Elizabeth Said.

"This is about that warning?" Makoto asked.

"Yes this the danger we warned you, The Abyss of Elysium". Elizabeth responded.

Everyone gasped but then Hamuko realized This woman gave the warning to Makoto that Teodore gave her, she then exclaimed and asked

"Why did he receive the same warning as me ?"

"His journey and yours are connected" Theodore responded.

"Anyways what is this tread?" Akihiko asked.

"This place is a shadow nest, it´s amplifying and merging the wish of death and destruction of people around, It´s expanding and with that the desire of people form their destruction, if you don´t destroy it a new appraiser will surge and with him the fall." Elizabeth responded.

Everyone was scared all their work and all the people that died in their journey to save the world would be for nothing if this place wasn´t destroyed, they must win no matter the cost.

"We believe that you can do it, don´t give up, Me and Elizabeth will give our support, Elizabeth will heal you and give you the item if you need it to fulfill your fate, one more thing since both of you can use fusion spells if each of you has the persona need it you can activate, good luck," Theodore said before they entered the door.

"Oh but first, take this," Theodore said as he gave Hamuko a SEES jacket.

"Thanks, Teo, but why did you give me That," Hamuko asked.

"Well, if all of you are gonna work together it would be better if all have the same outfit" Teodore responded.

The inside looks like a school. when they enter the door of the floors of Malebolge.

Then Fuuka explained

"It feels like an ordinary building, but I sense shadows, be careful"

It wouldn´t be too long before they saw a shadow, they attacked by surprise.

There were three Sky Balance

"They are weak to fire" Fuuka responded

"Allow me please" Hamuko stated

"Come Eurídice, Blazing Hell" She yells as her shadow appears it looks a lot like Makoto´s Eurídice with a golden Chest, a different Lyr, and longer orange hair, which cast many fire blasts.

The shadows were knocked down and then they proceeded to an all-out attack that eliminated all shadows.

"That was great" Akihiko Exclaimed

"I don´t understand why you have the same persona as me?" Makoto asked.

"Sorry, I don´t know, maybe great minds think the same" Hamuko Cherfully replies.

"Anyway let´s move" Makoto responded.

< They kept moving until they found a red hole and they used it to go down.

However when they came to the next floor, they were ambushed by four shadows an immortal Gigas, and three Viceral Mayas.

Fuuka felt another presence However escaped before everyone could tell would it was.

The shadow attacked them However they were unable to do any significant damage and some of their attack were to evade them.

Thanks to Fuuka they know their weaknesses Fire and Wind. So Yukarii summoned a Garudyne to Gigas and Makoto Maragidyne, they were stronger together, one of the reasons they loved each other so much, all shadows were knocked down and terminated without attack.

They continue towards the floors fighting and shadows and trying to find that person that Fuuka sees.

Eventually they came to the end of the area, it looked like a floating platform, but the door to the next area was locked and protected but two strange shadows one as an angel with golden hair a white mask, and red demos with horns bat wings a trident and Satyr's legs like with red skin.

Fuuka Then said "I sense the same that the arcana Shadows, their names are Temperance and Devil"

Everyone was shocked there the abyss had created arcana Shadows

They started to attack the shadows Makoto summoned Messiah and used Judgment Day (Colossal All-might damage with a medium chance of installing all foes), causing them a lot of damage. The Thecounter attacks with curse and wind spells, however, most of them avoid them and don´t cause much damage thanks to his items Ken and Jumpei did not receive any damage.

All SEES combined their attacks which destroyed those Shadows.

With that the door was open.

"Man that was easy" Jumpei Exclaimed.

"Too much, don´t you think ?" Ken responds to him.

"Yes, is odd, even some of the original shadows give a harder fight" Akihiko responded

"Maybe it´s because this place is a bad copy of Tartarus "Shinji replied.

Then Fuuka interrupted "Wait I sense something the death of this affected this place".

"How ?" Makoto asked

"IT sees that their destruction makes this place grow his reach, now the despair of more people is concerted here."Fuuka responded.

"But what if they are stepping our way?" Yukari asked his Boyfriend.

"We destroy them" Makoto responded.

"But that will make the reach of this place bigger" Mitsuru replied.

"I know but I don´t think we will have another choice, to reach the bottom of this place" Makoto Said

"I think you right about that, anyways let´s keep going" Mitsuru responded.

They ended their conversation and went to the next level of the abyss.

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Chapter 4: The Star and the tower.

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After defeating Temperance and Devil SEES passed the door to the next floor.

They enter a new area called Cocytus, it was a violet labyrinth. I didn't take too much time to Fuuka to feel the same presence again.

"That presence, it is the mysterious shadow we saw before, but I can't pinpoint its location"

"You're doing your best Fuuka don't worry" Shinji assured her, a blushing Fuuka responded "Thanks".

"Anyways let's keep going" Mitsuru stated.

They chased down that mysterious person through many floors. Until Fuuka stopped them to warn them that they were powerful shadows on the next floor.

However they continue going foward.

On the next floor they were ambushed by a Brilliant Cyplops, meanwhile, the mysterious presence escaped, as the battle started the Cyplops summoned four Soul dancers.

Fuuka advises them "This shadow is weak to ice".

Mitsuru took her evoker and "Artemisia. Ice age"

As she summoned an ice blast to all enemies, all dancers were knocked down, but the Cyplops absorbed the attack.

Next Mitsuru tried Marin Kain on the Cyclops by failed.

un next Shinji did the same and summoned his Persona"Hercules, Brave Blade", the cyclos were knocked down by a critical hit.

Then Shinji yelled "Alright, let's kick some ass!" as they continued to All out-attack and kill all shadows.

After the battle Ken asked "Who is that presence that escaped?"

Mitsure responded "They didn't attack it, they ignored it or it's one who created this place, we don't know who or what is, we must go".

Hamuko was worried that Metis could be that presence, but she was her mentor in her fight against shadows, her best friend, but she discarded. where was she, could she be the one who was chasing, but why was she doing this, she must find her, she was trapped in her thoughts, until Akiko touched her arm.

"Hamuko I know you are scared and worried, we need to continue, to find them"

With a blush Hamuko responded "Thanks Aki".

They continue to the end of the floor reaching, another golden door in a golden void. the door was locked and guarded by two shadows one, was a tortule a giant tower with a shell with lightning on top with a silver mask, and the other was a white eight-point star with a yellow mask in the center.

Fuuka warns "More arcana shadows, This is Tower and Star, be careful"

Tower increases their defence and Star their agility making them faster and more resistant as well as nerfing SEES.

Sees prepared by charged, concentrated.

Meanwhile Tower and Star strike with lighting and Bless strikes, causing a lot of damage. that Forces Hamuko to Heal all party with Anata, Meanwhile Makoto Summoned Satan and Used Black Viper on the Tower.

Jumpei with Trismegistus summon a giant blast of fire damaging the Tower But Star avoids them, and Aigis uses God's hand in the Tower.

Tower Stike again this time with Riot Gun and Star with Anganestia. Causing damage but Jumpei was Able to Avoid them.

Tower was very hurt so all of them attacked him causing his destruction.

Star proceeds again with blessing attacks but most of them avoid them except for Hamuko who repeals the attack.

All of them Attaked Star causing his destruction.

With their deaths the door opened However Fuuka that the abyss expanded his reach again.

" This expanded again right ?" asked a worried Makoto, "Yes" Fuuka responded.

"Anyways Let's go" Yukari replied, as his fiance nodded her and everyone continued to the next area.

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Chapter 5: The Moon and the Sun

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After defeating Tower and Star SEES passed the door to the next floor.

They enter a new area called Caina, it was a blue labyrinth. they continue exploring this area and going low towards a blue hole. explored the following floors until f*ckka warned them of an ambush on the next floor by two El Dorado beasts and one Death Castle.

"Messiah, Mabufudyne" Makoto yelled as he summoned his persona and attacked them with ice blasts knocking them down.

Follow by his dear Yukari "Isis, Vaccum wave" With that the last enemy was knocked down and killed with an all-out attack, after defeat then they were able to continue.

However when they proceed to the next floor the atmosphere changes to red.

"What happened?" Ken asked

"This area is larger than the previous ones that must be the reason for the change, this place could be as large as Tartarus" Fuuka responded.

"f*ck, after all this, first Tartarus now this, there's no end to this," said a faster and angry Hamuko.

"Don't worry we will end this as we end with Tartarus" Makoto responded trying to calm her and holding his hand on his right arm.

With Makoto's words Hamuko felt confidence and hope and sentiment that she remembered of her passed Brother Histato he looked so similar to him except that his hair was labrum like she.

"Thanks, sorry i was,,,,"

"Don't we understand" Makoto assured her.

"You are so optimistic, but that's one of the things that I love about you," Yukari told his fiance.

As they continued they were ambushed by a Haren dancer and two Merciless Maya again as a mysterious presence escaped again.

An intrigued Fuuka asked " Could it be ?. If shadows are waiting could "that" be the one who summoned them?"

The battle started as Makoto increased the attack of the party and automatically decreased their defenses.

"Isis, Vacum wave" Yukari yelled as she summoned Isis.

knocked down the Mayas however the dancer absorbed, Yukari attacked again killing the Mayas.

"Athena, God's hand" she attacked causing a critical hit and knocking the dancer down (I gave Agis a brave step), with they were able to all-out attack killing the last shadow.

With that they were able to continue reaching the last floor with a golden door around the stairs (same as the last floors in the answer), but it was guarded by a gigantic Bat with wings that resembled a Waxing crescent and a red mask and a Godlen man with a mask.

Fuuka warns them "More arcana shadows, These are Moon and Sun, get ready"

With the star of the Battle the foe's defense was lower and the party attack was increased (i the skill invented Auto-Marakunda ). Makoto and Mitsuru concentrated as Aigis charged, and Ken created a magic barrier to protect himself.

"Baldur, Shining arrows (is a severe bless damage to all foes here)" Ken said as he summoned his persona covering his enemies with light, Moon tried to strike Makoto but he avoided it however Sun was able to hit everyone with fire blasts but the one directed to ken was reflected causing damage.

"Athena, Akasha Arts (Same as in P5) ", "Artemisia, Ice Age" "Messiah, Judgement Day" causing massive damage to the shadows.

Sun and Moon hurtled strike back but their attacks were evaded, after that, the party started to charge concentrated and Ken put a physical shield.

They repeated their attacks leaving the shadow on the brink of death, then Moon tried to attack Ken but the strike was repealed killing her.

Sun was very hurt and desperately tried to attack them with fire but his attacks were resisted or evaded.

After that Makoto Uses Messiah to kill him. With that, the door was unlocked.

"We did it, we can pass," Akihiko said

"And that affected this place, right Fuuka? " Shinji asked

"UH, oh yes that's right" a blushed Fuuka responded.

"Anyways let's go" Akihiko said.

However Hamuko interrupted. "Wait, there's something I would like to ask you?"

"Sure BFF what is it?" Yukari asks her.

"How did you end with Tartarus and the original Dark Hour?" Hamuko asked them.

"well?" Makoto responded with a cold and sad tone.

Makoto explained to her that Ryoji was the Appriser he was the one who would bring the fall and how they were able to defeat him she was shocked she could never suspect that, however, they felt the sorrow in their story, he was his friend but the circ*mstances force him to be a destructor something that he didn't wishes for, how they can't safe him now she understood them better but how they never cross paths before was something trigger her mind.

"Thanks to trust me with this information, now let's go".

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Chapter 6: a Judge and a Pharoh.

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After defeating Moon and Sun SEES passed the door to the next floor.

They enter a new area called Antenora, it was a golden labyrinth. they continue exploring this area and going low towards a blue hole. explored the following floors until f*ckka warned then of an ambush on the next floor by an Ice raven, a Judgment Sword, and a Beast Wheel.

"Messiah, Diamond Dust" Makoto yelled as he summoned his persona Kncikg down the Beast Wheel.

Follow by Jumpei "Tresmegistus, Ragnarok" Kncikg down the Ice raven.

Then Yukari "Isis Garudyne" with that the last enemy was knocked down and killed with an all-ot-attack, after defeat then they were able to continue.

However when they proceed to the next floor the atmosphere changes to Violet. When they enter this new area Feel the same presence running away.

"Another change of area, proceed with caution." Fuuka said.

As they continue pursuing the mysteries presence to the next floor they are ambushed by a Shouting Tiara a Wrathful Book and a Primitive Idol.

An intrigued Fuuka asked " Could it be ?. If shadows are waiting could "that" be the one who summoned them?"

The battle started as Makoto increased the attack of the party and automatically decreased their defenses.

"Odin Thunder Reign" Makoto said attacking Primitive Idol

"Skadi Niflheim" Hamuko has summoned Freezing Shouting Tiara

And then Jumpei "Tresmegistus, Ragnarok" Kncikg down Wrathful Book, and they were able to all-out attack eliminating their enemies.

With that they were able to continue reaching the last floor with a golden door around the stairs (same as the last floors in the answer), but it was guarded by a giant green woman with a dress holding a balance with a Silver mask and Man with a hawk heal dress like a pharaoh with a golden ankh scepter.

Fuuka warns them "More arcana shadows, There are Judgment and Aeon, be careful."

With the star of the Battle the foe's defense was lower and the party attack was increased (i the skill invented Auto-Marakunda ). Makoto and Hamuko Concentrated Aigis charged, and Koromaru debilitated Aeon.

After that Judgment attacked with an ice blast and Aeon with Megiolagedon all, their attacks either caused little damage or were avoided.

"Messiah Final Judgement, Athena Akasha Arts, Lucifer Moring star, wufwuf (barked Koromaru summoning Cerberus and using it Demonic Decree (Severe curse damage to one foe). " everyone said as summoned their respective persona causing a lot of damage to the shadows.

Later Judgment puts a magic barrier and Aeon concentrates. Then Makoto and Hamuko Concentrated and Aigis charged again and Koromaru used a multi-hit physical attack on Judgment. Then proceed to repeat the same attacks on the shadows.

Then Judgment proceeded with ice attacks and Aeon tried a concentrated Meigiolagedon but both attacks were avoided.

With their stats back to normal Makoto and Hamuko Concentrated and Aigis charged again and Koromaru used debilitate Judgment.

they use the same attacks for tried times Killing Judgement a leaving Aeon to the brink of death, with Aeon uses Megioladon causing a bit of damage, after Makoto and Hamuko repeated their attacks fishing Aeon.

"All right another one bites the dust," Jumpei said

"Yeah but there is something that bothers me, Hamuko you and Makoto not only have the same persona, but can wield multiple personas, and your strategies and fighting skills are very similar," Akihiko said.

"Yeah is a kinda strategy but we will deal with that after we finish the work here, The reach of this place has increased again" Mitsuru responded.

"Yeah but what if they're so similar?" Akihiko asked again but a happy Hamuko held his hand and responded "Don't worry Aki maybe it's just a coincidence".

"Yeah maybe I overthinking it," Akihiko said to his girlfriend. Makoto looks at the happiness and cheerfulness of Hamuko and how much she resembles his late sister Kotone but she has Blue hair and eyes similar to him¨he then said.

"Anyways let's keep going".

Notes:

please review and if you enjoy it sheare and i you not please tell me.

Anyways the next chapter will be a bomb

Chapter 7: The truth is revealed.

Notes:

for the record, the fall in this AU works differently like a Thanos snap (and no I am not supporting or justifying anything that will be said).
All SEES and confidants are immune to the Fall.

(See the end of the chapter for more notes.)

Chapter Text

After defeating Judgment and Aeon SEES passed the door to the next floor.

They enter a new area called Ptolomea, it was a red labyrinth. they continue exploring this area and going low towards a blue hole. explored the following floors until f*ckka warned them of an ambush on the next floor by a Wondorus Magus, a Crying Table, and a Cowardly Maya.

"Messiah, Diamond Dust" Makoto yelled as he summoned his persona Kncikg down the Crying Table.

Follow by Hamuko "Eurydice, Blazing hell" Kncikg down the rest, then eliminate them with an all-ot-attack .

When they proceeded to the next floor the atmosphere changed to Golden. When they enter this new area Feel the same presence running away.

"That that presence what he wants, what is his purpose?." Fuuka said.

As they continue pursuing the mysteries presence to the next floor they were ambushed by two Slaughter Drives and a Spastic Turret .

"Ceasar Mazidyne" Akihiko said summoning his persona and knocking down the Slaughter Drives followed by Mitsuru "Artemisia Bufudyne" knocking down Spastic Turret and killing them with an All-out attack.

With that they were able to continue reaching the last floor. However this was different from the others, it was a Greek structure around a parade with a white sky with a gigant door, in front of them there were two people an old man with gray hair in shape with a blue shirt, black pants, and brown shoes and a robot that resembles Aigis but black with red eyes and accessories resemble butterflies.

"Granpa, Mestis what's going on, what're you doing here".

Then he responded "To answer your question, I created this place to restore the dark hour, to make the fall happen, to purge the world those who those who stagnate it".

"What're you talking about, you trained me to end this, make a better world," Hamuko said desperately trying to understand his response.

"That is not false, once the fall ends you and those who follow will inherit a new world full of strong people who need guidance to create a better brighter world, that's why I trained you"

"So you're the one responsible for this place Sakuya Shiomi right?" Mitsuru Said.

"Correct dear" the old man responded.

"Why did you do this ?" Fuuka asked.

"It's the next stage of my plans to the progress of mankind, a purge" He explained.

"Man, what the f*ck, progressing destroying the world?" Jumpei replied.

"Nothing that Brutal boy, Just Half, three quarters at most" He explained.

"Why the hell you want something that evil?" Akihiko asked.

"Because Mankind is on the brink of an era of decay and stagnation, as they say, hard times make strong people, strong people make good times, good times make weak people, weak people make hard times, that's why we need the fall, to purge the world those who wish for destruction will be gone leaving only those who not wish for death and those who reject it." the old man responded.

"You monster do you have any idea of how many people have died or suffered Apathy syndrome, all because of you" Ken yell him but then he responded with resentment.

"That would have never happened if that idiot of Takeba had never betrayed me" With that Yukari got very angry she couldn't her composure and yelled, "STUPID fa*gGOT LITTLE co*ckSUCKER SHUT THE f*ck UP YOU DISGUSTING PIECE OF sh*t!"

" And do you mean with betray you? Who are you and how do you know about the fall and the experiment?" Fuuka asked, but then Makoto realized something.

"Sakuya Shiomi is a false name, Right?"

Everyone gasped at his statement specially Hamuko.

"What are you talking about he's my grandfather".

But then the old man said "Oh ho ho, then who thinks I am?"

"He has another anti-shadow weapon, knows about, the fall, and the accident, despises Yukari's father, and has resources and knowledge to make another Tartarus and another dark hour, there is just one person who fits all those features, Kotetsu Kirijo".

Everyone was shocked by that statement, it was impossible, Mitsuru's grandfather died in a night accident, he was dead, it had to have but, then the man laughed and clapped with his response "Congratulations boy you Nailed it, I'm Kotetsu Kirijo."

"What, you're my grandfather, but you died that night I and my father were at your funeral".

"Well my death was greatly exaggerated and with my ghost account filled with the wealth "extracurricular businesses" (aka been crimelord), and the "tax creativity" (evasion) and plastic surgeries it was relatively easy to be another person, as well as convincing and erasing the memory of the surgeons."

Hamuko couldn't believe what she just heard about her life was a lie then who was she? "That couldn't be my life is a lie, then the death of my parents was a lie, the death of my brother Lie!?"

"No and yes" Kotetsu quietly responded.

"What're you talking about ?" Hamuko yelled.

"When Takeba betrayed me and caused Death to revive incomplete and divide into fourteen shadows killing all the scientists I was able to use my power to survive and escape"

"Your power, you mean ?" Mitsuru asked.

"Yes I also have a persona like you. When me and my parent have a plane accident the trauma allows me to awaken it. the resurrection of the appraiser was a failure and his parts disappeared, except for one seal inside him, that was unexpected, and more unexpected was the grand potential he had, and to be even luckier he had a twin with the same potential."

"She's dead, he died because of your psychotic ideas," Makoto said with sorrow and anger in his voice.

"Oh boy you shouldn't believe anything you see. When checked her potential I ordered Metis to take her."

Makoto was shocked by the revelation his twin sister was alive, but was at her funeral, how did she see the grave, then Hamuko said.

" Then where is she i never saw her." Then everyone realized.

"You mean that Hamuko is," Akihiko said followed by Kotetsu "Correct, Kotone Yuki."

She was so shocked that she collapsed her true name Kotone and Makoto was her Brother. She realized all was true as her twisted memories were restored to normal, originally she remembered her twin brother as someone with her hair and eye color, the same as Makoto. Both Fell because of the mental shock. she felt betrayed by Metis she was her mentor and best friend.

"Metis you kidnapped me, you lied to me and used all for this, why did you do this to me, you keep away from my family. I will never forgive you" Metis felt bad about that response but she couldn't blame her he cared for her with the time she saw her as a little sister.

Makoto couldn't believe what just happened.

"Kotone is dead, I was at her funeral" Makoto responded.

"Boy with my knowledge about cognitive science and research as well as my resources faking a death and funeral is a child's play, as well as changing her memories so she thinks her name is Hamuko. " Kotetsu replied.

"Why did you do this, why did you take her, why did you believe she died" Makoto asked very affected by this revelation.

"After the accident, Ikutsuki and I tried to create persona users to explore the consequences of the accident, he and I were curious about Tartarus, and the Dark hour, even if it wasn't planned. However, they were too weak to eliminate the shadows and bring the appraiser so we changed plans and he convinced my son to create SEES formed by people so they could eliminate shadows and bring the fall. Meanwhile, I helped her to become the savior after the fall, with the help of Ikutsuki as well as Capacities it was easy to know when you went to Tartarus so She and Metis were able to avoid you. You were supposed to be eliminated once the 13 shadows were killed, and Fused the Reaming one Death, I didn't expect that Aigis was able to rebel against her orders and kill Ikutsuki."

Mitsuru couldn't believe what her grandfather just said she wanted to kill her and her friends, he was responsible for the death of her father, she was speechless then he continued.

"Despite the lack of power of the artificial users the ones who call Strega, they were useful in other forms, Spreading the desire for destruction helping not only to bring the fall. With anonymous help they created the Cult of Nyx what you think a hacker and an evil hippie alone were able to convert so many people around not only in the town but around the world, with the use of my found as well as knowledge of cognition I was able to use the original dark hour and Tartarus to expand the Nyx cult"

"Why did you help to Create a suicidal cult?" Shinji ask

"To make only those with the strongest will to live to survive, the world needs to get rid of weak spinless magots".

"Then why Separete me form Kotone ?" Makoto asked.

"I knew that Aigis sealed Death inside you, I believe that you will be able to restore his full potential or even surpass it, I make you a trauma so you will have no other choice but to be stronger so death can be too, however, I never thought that he will separate from you and became his person. He was supposed to bring the fall, so after that Kotone will become the hope and guide those who survive together with Metis they could create a better world a superior world, however, your influence affects his purpose and your hope influences the people around you the cowards the seeps the maggots one by one all of them rejected the wish of the fall. I couldn't believe it. What a failure the result is. When you ended the dark hour you forced me to use all the knowledge to get of studying it to create new shadows to create a new dark hour, a new Tartarus, Elysium, and to spread the influence and the desire for death so a new appraiser appeared."

Makoto was angry with that response he and Ryoji were used as pawns in an insane game, he said.

"We wanted to help the innocent, save our friends and family"

"In the long term it will do more bad than good, there are too many weak people you never heard about the survival of the strongest, in other words, you will only private humanity to their evolution." the old man said.

"Don't say that bullsh*t" Shinji responded.

"I just tell the truth in my youth I was a philanthropist i gave money to the poor and tried to use my gifts to benefit Mankind, however everything I did was pointless, people always asked for more they never were anything more than parasites trying to steal from the people. Slaves that degenerate the world. Then one day I encountered a Crystal"

"A crystal?" Akihiko asked.

"Yes it was remnants of Nyx of a previous fall, that empowered all shadows suppression weapons as well as all devices that work during the dark hour. Initially when I discovered it time properties I tried to use it to change the past, but then I realized the risk that implied if someone else, especially politicians got access to that power. That is when I discover the Fall the purge that this world needs to evolve from those who to be enslaved" He said.

"What are you talking about no one wishes to be enslaved" Yukari replied.

"Have you ever heard about clientelism, how politician gives money stolen from those who earn it to maintain the lazy? American has one quote Give me freedom or give me death. Well, I added something,

"To those who reject freedom give them death" He stated.

"

You're insane" Ken replied.

"Believe whatever you want kid, but it's a better scenario, a free man and several corpses than all been slaves, even if that what they want" Kotestu stated.

"What did you do about the weak, you always have a food plate, you never fought to survive?" Shinji asked.

"But you survived, you did what you had to do to achieve your goal, and with your bare hands you improved your life" Kotetsu replied.

"We will stop you" Makoto stated.

"And then What you think you can seal the evil away, keep mankind pure and away from the darkness they created themselves, Don't make me laugh with that dumb bullsh*t" Kotetsu replied.

"You have been an obstacle to my plans for so much. Metis kill them"

Metis to that order stood firm And "She is my little sister, even if she hates me, I will not kill her."

"So you also betrayed me very well. Code Zero Zero Zero Destruct Zero" With that, an aura emanated from Metis, and then "AH" Metis yelled going to attack SEES and several shadows appeared "Something happened to her" Fuuka warned.

"Fool me once shame on you, fool me twice, shame on me, did you really think after what happened with Aigis I wouldn't have a plan b? " He said

"You bastard, what did you do to her?" Jumpei asked.

"I make her go berserk, don't you even bother to resonate with her, if want to pass you will need to kill her" Then he escaped.

"Get back here you coward" Jupei replied.

"Defeat them first if you want to come for me". as a horde of shadows appeared to support Metis

"Mestis is some kind of overclock mode, get ready, to deal with Metis, and the front four shadows the rest from those to left and right" f*ckka warns them to get ready to fight (Makoto, Kotone, Yukari, and Aigis).

With the start of the Battle all auto buffs and debuffs were canceled at each other. then Makoto Concentrated, Yukari used Vaccum Wave, Kotone Used Neo Cadenza and Aigis Charged. then a Shadows attacked but avoided the attacks and Metis concentrated.

They use their attacks "Messiah, Judgment Day, Isis Vacum wave, Athena Akasha Arts, Eurydice Blazing hell" With their attacks the shadows around Metis were killed.

"AH" metis yelled, the fuuka "Whatever he did to her she is getting overcharged it's just a matter of time before she dies" "What no it can't be we have to do something" "First we need to stop her"

Then Metis attacked with Anima Stike (Heavy all-might damage to all foes, hit twice) with that SEES received a lot of damage.

Then they repeated the changing and concentrated and Yukari healed them and Kotone debilitated Metis, She tried to attack them again but they avoided it.

Then SEES strike again and Kotone uses blazing hell sourly defeating Metis and then falls to the ground Kotone comes to help her but Metis assures her.

"It's too late to help me"

"No, I will save you" Then Kotone started to cry.

"It's fine you already did it, before i go want to tell you that I am sorry for what I did, i always followed him with questions but when I met you, I had a little friend to help protect, I always billed his vision, but now see you can create a bright, so please stop this madness, before i go i want you to have this" with that her Persona Psyche was passed to Kotone.

"Goodbye" With that Metis eyes turned off it was clear to her all of then that Metis died, then Makoto and Yukari went and hugged her, Kotone was devastated her best friend, older "sister" and mentor was now dead, Makoto clearly understood as he failed to save Ryoji.

Then Kotone realizes " Thank you guys, but there's no time to waste. Now I know who I am, I know my place in the world and my purpose. I will make Kotetsu pay for everything he did, I won't allow him to steal everything from me anymore, and will save our friends"

With that Then blue aura emanates from him as her Eurydice and Psyche fuse and evolve into Saivior, It was similar to Messiah But her hair is longer and Orange, and four golden wings, Saviour (Messiah also has four wings).

"Let's go we must end this" Kotone stated.

"Yeah sis" Yukari said.

"What, oh yeah you are gonna marry with brother, so you will be my sister-in-law" Kotone replied as Yukari nodded.

"What? , congratulations dude" Jumpei said.

"Yeah you're welcome anyways let's continue" Makoto responded as everyone was one step to the final battle.

Notes:

The answer was a disrespect for the MC, even sending his soul to hell would have been better only a nihilist with great disrespect for the souls could think something that evil.

please leave a comment on what you think and what not, so I can improve.

Chapter 8: The new world.

Notes:

(See the end of the chapter for notes.)

Chapter Text

Sees crossed the door to their final battle for the fate and lives of their loved ones.

When they cross them they enter into a coliseum surrounded by eight torches and in the center was Kotetsu and a woman holding a baton in each hand, surrounded by a wreath with a white mask.

Then old man greeting them.

"Welcome"

"What is that? Don't tell me, is a new appriser" Mitsuru asked.

"Indeed, the new appraiser, this is the creator of the abyss, the last one and most powerful of my creations, this is the combination of all Shadow you killed here this is World she made it stronger with each shadow you kill. It will succeed where Death fail"

Then Akihiko realized something "So if we destroy it then this place and the new dark hour will disappear"

"Correct kid, however, I will not gonna leave a bunch of naive kids to ruin the purge and evolution of the world" Kotetsu stated, then an angry Kotote said.

"Enough i will save my friends, they're y real family, they love and care about me and I will pay for the death of Metis"

Then he replied "She kidnapped you and yet you still care for that useless machine".

"You ordered her to do it but she cared for me, she had feelings, she was loyal, but in you just use her, she was more human than you ever be" Kotone replied.

" And what is that huh?, let people continue the decay of their societies, let weak men ruin everyone's lives, the fall is a blessing beyond your comprehension, but enough of useless discussions" Kotestu stated.

"You Stole our parent's life, you brainwashed my memories, you separated my brother from me, you killed my best friend, We will not let you kill our friends" Kotone stated.

A fed-up Makoto nodded and said "Your Madness ends here"

"So be it come Erebus" That shadow came from behind Kotetsu it was his persona, it was a male black void figure with his body covered in stars and violet eyes as he summoned shadow to assist him in battle.

"There are too many shadows separate in groups to fight them" As the star of the battle Makoto, Kotone, Mitsuru, and Yukari go to fight Kotetsu and their shadows with Fuuka supporting them. Jumpei, Aigis, and Koromaru are the shadows to the left, and Akihiko, Shinji, and Ken are the ones on the right.

As the Battle started all auto buffs and debuffs were canceled at each other. then Makoto used the fusion spell Omen (Messiah + Saivior increased all party stats, shared and concentrated them). then rest attacked "Isis Vaccum wave, Artemisia Ice Age, Saivior Holy Souls (Severe All might damage hit twice)". then a Shadows attacked but saw avoid the attacks and Kotetsu used the Heat riser.

Then Makoto used Judgment Day, and the rest attacked "Isis Vaccum wave, Artemisia Ice Age, Saivior Holy Souls (Severe All might damage hit twice)" causing massive damage to their enemies, then the shadows tried to attack them with fire, ice, lightning, and wind but all failed.

"Impressive kids but now is my turn, Erebus Megidolaon" Kotetsu commands his persona causing a bit of damage.

Then sees proceed to repeat their attacks killing the shadows, with Kotetsu stating "Well but it's not over" as he proceeds to concentrate.

With the effect of Omen ending Makoto and Mitsuru concentrated, meanwhile, Yukari attacked with a Vacum wave and Kotone Debilitate him.

them Makoto proceeds "Messiah Judgment day" With his attack Kotetsu fell defeated on the ground but he was unwilling to give up, meanwhile, the rest of the Sees eliminate the remaining shadows.

"Give up Is over" Makoto stated, but then the old man yelled.

"No It's not over. I will not let you ruin the progress and evolution of mankind, I will not let you ruin my better world."

"Give up man you're defeated and have no more allies," Jumper said.

"Oh really?" then the shadow moved to help his creator as she started to emanate a golden light to him, "World give your power so I can bring the new, fulfill your purpose, and avenge your siblings" With that World give his powers and fused with Erebus causing a massive wave of energy and making Erebus evolved it became greater with his head having the appearance of a beast, bright red balls that resemble eyes and from his chest emerge a rib cage. Kotetsu has recovered and is stronger than ever he became as new shadows appeared.

" With Chaos the arrival of Nyx and purge of the world is nigh".

"We will create our World" Makoto replied.

as the battle restarted. Makoto used Neo Cadenza, Yukari Salvation, Kotone, and Mitsuru Concentrated. then a Shadows attacked but avoided the attacks and Kotetsu Concentrated.

Next Time Makoto debilitated him then the rest proceeded to strike then the rest attacked "Isis Vaccum wave, Artemisia Ice Age, Saivior Holy Souls". Causing Massive damage
then Chaos uses Primal Darkness (Collosal all-might damage hits all foes) Causing some damage.

Then Makoto, Kotone, and Mitsuru Concentrate Meanwhile Yukari heals them, and Chaos uses Primal Darkness again.

Then Makoto used Neo Cadenza again and the rest "Isis Vaccum wave, Artemisia Ice Age, Saivior Holy Souls". Caused massive damage, and then Chaos's debuffs ended up back causing a lot of damage.

Then Makoto proceeded to debilitate him, Yukari to heal them and Kotone and Mitsuru to Concentrate on the next strike. Chaos Tried to attack them But failed.

Then they were ready to cause massive damage "Messiah Judgment day. Isis Vaccum Wave, Artemisia Ice Age" With those attacks Chaos was on the brink of defeat, the Kotone gave it the final strike "Saivior Holy Souls".With her attack, the massive black monster that was his persona began to disappear until all left was a weak defeated Kotetsu..

"You have lost give up," Akihiko said.

"You think you won, you only make sure that mankind will have a fate worse than death, But if that is the world that you want, then enjoy it, if you survive" With that statement Kotetsu took a pill from his pocket and swallowed it. After that, he began to crumble and he started to spill foam at the mouth, Sees was to see him committing suicide. However, his death caused the abyss to start to collapse.

"What's happening ?" Jupei asked.

"He told us that Shadow World was the reason was corn of the abyss, so with his death, this place will collapse" Ken responded.

"Enough Talking run," Shinji said.

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They started to run and go out of the Coliseum, but they were too deep to escape in time, they were hopeless until a bright door came out at the entrance, and heard Vioce say

"Quick over here!" they were Elizabeth and Theodore when they all entered the room a bright light covered everything.

Then Makoto and Kotone woke up sitting in front of Igor and his assistant and His friend were behind them, they were all in the Velvet Room, with his normal form of an elevator going up.

"Are you alright?" Makoto asked.

"Yeah. Where is this place ?" Yukari asked.

"There's no need to worry" Igor Stated.

"This is the Velvet Room. Is where those who awaken the wild card received guidance." Theodore explained.

"We commend you here to help you to escape the abyss. Is collapsing the flow of time will be restarted and all you will return to the place you were before this started, you will return to your normal lives congregations." Elizabeth Continue.

"Wait what about Nyx ?" Kotone asked.

"Nyx is neither good nor evil, Rather a force of balance, her body in one the moon, and her psyche on earth, and is in contrast to the psyche of life on earth, and as long as the desire to live is greater Nyx will remain inactive., You have proved that mankind's hope and desire to live is stronger than their grief and desire of death, and you two embody that desire, two twins that overcome the worst tragedies and manage to bring light to everyone around you as well as yourselves and reuniting as a family, as long as people have hope the calamity of the fall will not return" Theodore Stated

With that Kotone responded "I always believed I was alone, now realize who is my true family not just Makoto, everyone around me, this is the answer to my life be with those who love me, be who I am".

Makoto was very happy to hear his sister's statement

"Goodbye," said both Elizabeth and Theodore.

"We're reaching our destination, you two were truly magnificent remarkable guests" With that word from Igor the door behind him opened revealing a bright light too shiny.

After that the girl returned to the slumber party they were very silent about everything that happened then Chihiko asked "Are you alright" Yukari responded "Yeah we were distracted with something, nevermind"

Then Rio stated "Then Let'spatry!", everyone nodded and continued with their games until they fell asleep.

The Next morning everyone meets in SEES dorms as Kotone decides she will move there, with happened she can't live in her house so big and lonely.

"Welcome," everyone told him as she entered with her stuff.

"Kotone I'm sorry but after your "death" all your previous things were donated, however, I want to give you this" With that Makoto showed her a photo of a man with auburn hair and red eyes and a woman with blue hair and eyes, Kenshi Yuki and Misato Yuki (Nee Arisato) and it was a photo of their parents it was taken it before the bridge accident with that Kotone start to cry and hug his twin as she finally was with her family again.

"Thank you so much BroBro".

"Man we saved the world again" Jumpei stated.

"Yeah, but what if someone else influences humanity to wish for their destruction or if they wish for it willingly ?" Mitsuru asked.

"We will create a brighter world one in which no one wishes for that" Makoto responded.

"Are you sure? it seems impossible ?" Aigis stated.

"If I didn't try I wouldn't know. I Will not let the world end I will live my life the way I wish and help others with their tragedies and if I fail at least we will try. Will you help me?" Makoto said.

"Of course dear" Yukari responded.

"You have ambition, I support you the Kirijo Group had a lot of sins that I will make sure will be redeemed" Mitsuru stated.

"I'm" "Sure" as everyone gives support to Makoto's goal then he makes a statement.

"When I came here I got nothing no friends, family, I didn't care for anything or anyone. Thanks to all of you not only did I recover my family but I got a new one, all you, thank you for saving me from myself."

With everyone going to the door they take a picture of their group a symbol of the bonds they created that will never disappear, their love for each other, a picture that symbolizes how they overcome their sorrow,the picture of a happy family.

Notes:

so this is the end the next chapter will be an epilogue.

please review and if you enjoy it share it, feedback is always appreciated.

Chapter 9: Epilogue.

Summary:

to anyone, I apologize if I say something wrong or forget any part of how a wedding is supposed to be.

Notes:

(See the end of the chapter for notes.)

Chapter Text

The Abyss has been destroied, mankind was free from the fall, Makoto and reunited with his only living Family member live couldn't been better, weeks after Kotetsu's death (Sakuya) was declared officially death Kotone (Hamuko for normal people) was given all his properties and fortune with the data found in her house The Kirijo group was able to find hunreds of millons of Usd in ghost accountns that now belong to Kotone, she decide to share half of her new fortune with her twin brother as a compensation for the pain suffered in their lives, Makoto was no poor man thanks to the expedition in Tartarus and Styx (I canged the money limit to 10000000 Yen to 100000000 Yen), But he was not an idiot and did't want to argue with his twin so he accepted now he has more than enough money not onlt to pay his wedding, also to Studies any colledge carrer without rely on a soclarship, even if the money did't come from the most honest place, that did't matter to him, just how he will use it and he will use it improve the world, with invesments with help of Mitsuru and donations to charity, Kotone sheared his idea.

The rest of the year was quiet and peaceful, At the end year Makoto president of the student council graduated with honors as the first of his class with Fuuka as 2nd. It was the Graduation and Makoto was selected to give the speech as was standing at the podium ready to speak as all his friends were listening.

"Dear students it was an honor to me to know all of you, I lived alongside all of you and I see all of you maturate and help with your problems, I wish you the best wishes and to remind you never lose hope to a brighter tomorrow, I would like you to thank you all the wonderful experiences I live with you, thank you so much for this wonderful years." as ended his speech everyone cheer and clapped as he goes to received his diploma, he sat down as his classmate goes to their diploma, when his friends not only is SEES but in the school they started to take photos of the celebrations.

The next weekend it was the wedding of Makoto and Yukari, it was a western wedding set in a church in Tatsumi Port Island, with the reception later in a luxurious hotel, as the guests were all the students and people the couple friend over this year as the preparation begins the couple has to separate to be ready for the ceremony, with their attendants assisting them for the ceremony.

Makoto had a simple black suit with a white shirt with a blue ribbon, the.

“Dude, You look pretty elegant in that suit, aren’t ya nervous?” Junpei asks him.

“You flatter me and no after all that happened I'm ready for everything” Makoto replied "By the way you got the rings Akihiko" he asked.

"Of course" Akihiko replied as he showed a box with the rings.

Makoto was very happy as he soon would be married to the woman of his dreams, he wished that his parents could be here to see it but at least Kotone was here helping her soon sister-in-law.

Meanwhile in another room.

The contrary to Makoto Yukari was being attended to by several attendants including her Mother Hikari. She was bride was dressed in a dress with her signature collar, and purple earrings borrowed from her mother as she "now fulfilled the tradition of something new, something old, something borrowed, and something blue" Yukari stated."Huh, something blue?" Fuuka asked.as Yukari giggles and responds "My husband of course." as everyone laughs."Look as beautiful dear, your father would have been so proud to see you now" Hikari stated as she hugged her.

"Are you ready honey to marry the love of your life ?" Her mom asked as she stated "Yes".

With both ready, Makoto aside to Akihiko and Kotone as the Flower lady, was standing waiting for his fiance the door opened revealing Yukari with a white veil been taken to the altar for her mother with the sound of a piano when they came to where Makoto stands Yukari opened her veil when Makoto saw her he saw what can only be described as an angel " You are beautiful" with statement Yukari blush "Please take care of each other" Hikari said.

Now the ceremony begins with Makoto taking the ring and putting it on Yukari´s finger, with that the priest begins "Dear bother and sister we reunite here to continue Makoto Yuki and Yukari Takeba in sacred marriage"

"Makoto do you accept Yukari as your wife to take care of her and love her in health and sickness until death separates them?"

"Yes, accept" Makoto responded.

"Yukari do you accept Makoto as your wife to take care of her and love her in health and sickness until death separates them?"

Yes, accept" Yukari responded.

"Ladies and gentlemen for the power given by god is a pleasure to me to introduce to mr and Miss Yuki, you can now kiss the bribe" With these words the kiss as everyone claps and congratulates them.

As they left the church Yukari threw the corsage and it was caught by Shinji.

During the reception everyone got someone to dance Jumpei with Chidori, Shinji with Fuuka, and even Mitsuru as he invited an old friend Takuto Maruki to the celebration, It was the happiest day in their lives.

Notes:

and this is the end get ready for the next story bye.

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Chapter 10: The other one who ruled over power.

Summary:

Makoto has received a special request as SEES is Exploring The Abyss of Elysium.

Notes:

This Happened before cap 7. NG+

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Makoto has received a request from Theodore to look for a door on floor -150 alone with no one other than Fuuka.

Where he found a door, when he passed he passed to an unknown floor.

"Where are we?" Makoto asked.

"I don't know I can reach any track" f*ckka responded.

"Let's move to find an exit" Makoto stated as they nodded as they encountered a similar door, when they entered they saw a green room with a giant clock on the back, in front of them Theodore was standing there.

"Welcome," Theodore said in a polite tone.

"What do you request us to be here?" Fuuka asked.

"Well, to put it simply, he is the person who defeated my sister" Theodore explained.

"No, you want to defeat me to avenge her" Makoto asked.

Theodore began to laugh with his conclusion "Of course not. I asked you here to fight you that's true but for that reason. My sister has always teased me thinking she's better than me. So I asked you to fight me, the rules would be the same as with her. If I bear her up in her own game, I will finally be better to her in something" He explained.

"I'm sorry but we're kinda busy" f*ckka replied.

"I understand. So I make some changes as long as you're here the time won't pass so you don't have to worry about your journey here" Theodore explained.

"Also I wanna know how powerful is the one who shares His journey with my Guest" Theodore continued.

"That means that you fought with Hamuko" Makoto asked.

"Yes. I apologize the result of our battle is between us" Theodore responded.

"Well, would you accept my request?" Theodore asked.

"Very well" Makoto responded.

"My most sincere gratitude, don't worry I will heal you after the battle regardless of the ending," Theodore said as he opened his book and threw some cards in front of him.

"This is Elizabeth's brother his power level is insane, Be Careful" Fuuka warned him. As the Battle begins with both having Auto-Riser.

"I'm he who ruled over power. I advise you not to hold back. Fight as though you intended to kill" Theo suggested as he summoned Uriel and Used Inferno causing damage.

Then Makoto used Concentrated with Lucifer. Then Theodore attacked with his cards. Then Makoto debilitates him.

The Theo used Diamond Dust with Gabriel.

"Messiah" Makoto used a Judgment Day.

Then Theo reset his stats then attacked with Phamta Rai using Raphael.

Makoto strikes back with Diamond dust with Messiah.

Theodore lowered his defenses and used Devine Judgment with Sandalphon but the attack was nulled as Makoto produced to debilitate him.

Theodore concentrates and attacks using Morning Star causing lots of damage.

Then Makoto used his Fusion spell Trickter causing a lot of damage and decreasing his stats.

Then Theodore Chuckled " No wonder how you be able to defeat my sister. However, this is not over yet"

Then Theo used Demonic Decree with Lillith.

"Messiah" Makoto used a Judgment Day.

Then Theo Strike with Abaddon using Brave Blade.

Then Fuuka used her Theurgy Charge/Concentrating Makoto as he struck back with God's Hand with Messiah.

Theodore lowered Debilitate Him and used God's Hand with Metatron.

Then Makoto used his Fusion spell Valhalla.

Theodore's attacks with Moring star are Reapled by Makoto causing him a lot of damage.

Then Theo used Demonic Decree with Lillith.

"Messiah" Makoto used a Judgment Day.

Then Theo Strike with Abaddon using Brave Blade.

Theodore Charged Him and used Primal Force with Saturnus.

Then Makoto used his Fusion Aldrahari.

Theodore responded using Thunder Reign with Michael.

Then Makoto concentrate.

Then Theo used Inferno with Uriel.

Makoto fires back with Trickter causing Massive Damage and Decreasing his stats.

The Theodore used Moring Star causing a lot of damage.

"Messiah" Makoto yelled using his signature move defeating Theodore.

"You have won. I accepted my defeat. Even though I lost I don't regret anything I fought with I have. You help me to realize something I shouldn't care for when my sister teases me. From now on I will no longer be his servant if she isn't fine with that is her problem thanks take this as a reward" Theo said as he gave Makoto an item called the Omnipotent orb

"Well, You shall be returned with your friends. Please over here" Theo pointed out a teleport.

When they passed the teleport Makoto and Fuuka met once against with their friends.

"Where have you been?" Yukari asked with a pissed tone, maybe thinking that Her fiance is cheating on her.

"Well Theodore asked us to come to fight him" Fuuka explained.

"You fought Theo too, he is thought, I admitted myself that defeating him was really hard. Could you defeat him?" Hamuko asked him.

"Yes, I did" Makoto responded.

"Wow you're as awesome as me" Hamuko replied.

"Well let's continue we have more important things to do," Akihiko said.

"Now I wanna fight Elizabeth, Makoto could you ask her to fight with me, Later?" Hamuko asked.

"I'll see what I can do" Makoto told her.

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